Querida Meghan,
Ahora llegue en Rio de Janeiro. Ayer visits el museos y oi la opera muy interesante. Fui, en el un restaurante fantastico con mia familia. La comida es diferente de los Estados Unidos pero me gusta.Comi arroz con pollo y bebi el vino. Fui nadar en la playa, las playas son muy bonita. Anoche sali para escuche la musica en un cafe.Tambien vimos el cine. Eran los sabado cuando la vuelta. La semana pasada, fui oi al concierto. Muitas agente asistieron al concierto.
El hotel es muy excelente y barato. Estoy en un hotel en Rio de Janeiro, Brasil. Tuviste cinco estrela y pension completa. Dormi a la habitacion doble. Ayer fui la picina y bebe vino . Anoche fui a la discoteca para bailar. No quiero sali el Brazil.
Good job RosaAngela. I notice you have been consistent with the use of the preterite and kept your sentences simple and easy to read. However, I would like you to add more content to this posting. For instance, Did you go with your family? How long did you stay? What did you eat?
ReplyDeleteI would also like you to consider revising these phrases:
1. "Ayer viste el museos y oi el benda" Correct the spelling of the first verb and the word "benda" . The agreement of the articles and nouns do not correspond.
2. "Fui" This verb is standing alone with no predicate. The phrase that follows this verb is correct and is completely independent.
3. "Fui nade en la playa" " Anoche sali para escuche " "fui oi al concierto" The first verb is correct but the second verb should be in the infinitive in these phrases.
4."Muitas". This sounds like portuguese.
5. "Tuviste cinco estrela" Are you talking about the hotel here? if so, the verbs inflection does not correspond.
6. "Ayer fui la picina y bebe vino" Be consistent with the verb tense. If the first phrase is in the preterite then in the second you should keep the same tense as well. Note that this is different than in case 3.
7. "Me no quece dijo Brazil" Not sure what you mean here.